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class couldnt figure out why the rooms would freeze at night, cladsmates convinced sgts had a master thermostat switch, it was actually oe turning it down......
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This is what I have so far, if you'd be so kind as to critique:

Liberty and Tyranny: A Conservative Manifesto by Mark Levin, famed conservative author and radio host, is a 2009 New York Times best-selling political themed book. The book was #1 on New York Times’ best-selling list for 11 out of 12 weeks and has sold over a million copies. The book has been both celebrated by conservatives and despised by liberals everywhere. Despite all of its accolades however, Liberty and Tyranny has not been met without some resistance. One such critic is Terry Krepel, whom will be quoted later as well, who stated: “Levin's book is just right-wing talking points served up in a different format -- as the beliefs of ‘Conservatives’ and how they differ from ‘Statists’ (spoiler: conservatives are good, statists are bad), concluded by a bullet-point ‘conservative manifesto.’ Anyone familiar with hard-right conservative ideology already knows what's in it.”

After I finish this intro paragraph I will have a paragraph stating the author's thesis (the one I already posted) then I'll move on from there.
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class couldnt figure out why the rooms would freeze at night, cladsmates convinced sgts had a master thermostat switch, it was actually oe turning it down......
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Lulz, I think I'm going to enjoy it. Just really going to suck missing a WHOLE summer of drinking and shooting the bull with friends.
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Mean bastard. My buddy told me the only thing your allowed to read at basic is miltary books or the bible/religious books. So I guess ill read the bible and **** around. Showers with other men will be awkward at first
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nut to butt, u wont care
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This is what I have so far, if you'd be so kind as to critique:

Liberty and Tyranny: A Conservative Manifesto by Mark Levin, famed conservative author and radio host, is a 2009 New York Times best-selling political themed book. The book was #1 on New York Times’ best-selling list for 11 out of 12 weeks and has sold over a million copies. The book has been both celebrated by conservatives and despised by liberals everywhere. Despite all of its accolades however, Liberty and Tyranny has not been met without some resistance. One such critic is Terry Krepel, whom will be quoted later as well, who stated: “Levin's book is just right-wing talking points served up in a different format -- as the beliefs of ‘Conservatives’ and how they differ from ‘Statists’ (spoiler: conservatives are good, statists are bad), concluded by a bullet-point ‘conservative manifesto.’ Anyone familiar with hard-right conservative ideology already knows what's in it.”

After I finish this intro paragraph I will have a paragraph stating the author's thesis (the one I already posted) then I'll move on from there.
Thoughts,complaints,testimonials?

Seems pretty solid, imo.
 
we never slept under the sheets so we could sleep a little later....so I starting putting ironing boards in peoples beds so when they hopped on it
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Yeah hopefully good friends there will make it fly by and me not miss back home.
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You will have a special bond with people who r complete strangers, youll go through a lot of crap together, nothing like getting up in the middle of the night in full riot gear and playing in the sandbox, then inspection that morning and sand is every where......it has it purpose
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You will have a special bond with people who r complete strangers, youll go through a lot of crap together, nothing like getting up in the middle of the night in full riot gear and playing in the sandbox, then inspection that morning and sand is every where......it has it purpose
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Haha were you ever in the military
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Seems pretty solid, imo.

If you don't mind, I will post more of it as I go to get your opinion. Not the whole paper (5 pages) but maybe the first just to make sure I'm staying on track pretty well. I don't have anyone at home to review and critique it for me. Is that OK?
 

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