This is what I have so far, if you'd be so kind as to critique:
Liberty and Tyranny: A Conservative Manifesto by Mark Levin, famed conservative author and radio host, is a 2009 New York Times best-selling political themed book. The book was #1 on New York Times best-selling list for 11 out of 12 weeks and has sold over a million copies. The book has been both celebrated by conservatives and despised by liberals everywhere. Despite all of its accolades however, Liberty and Tyranny has not been met without some resistance. One such critic is Terry Krepel, whom will be quoted later as well, who stated: Levin's book is just right-wing talking points served up in a different format -- as the beliefs of Conservatives and how they differ from Statists (spoiler: conservatives are good, statists are bad), concluded by a bullet-point conservative manifesto. Anyone familiar with hard-right conservative ideology already knows what's in it.
After I finish this intro paragraph I will have a paragraph stating the author's thesis (the one I already posted) then I'll move on from there.
Thoughts,complaints,testimonials?