Looking for feedback, discussion on poem.

#51
#51
I wrote a bit today:

Soulja Boy up in it
Watch Me Lean And Watch Me Rock
Super Man Dat HOE
Then Watch Me Crank Dat Robocop
Super Fresh, Now Watch Me Jock
Jocking On Them Haterz Man
When I Do Dat Soulja Boy
I Lean To The Left And Crank Dat Dance
I'm Jocking On Yo B**** Ass
And If We Get The Fightin
Then I'm Cocking On Your B****
You Catch Me At Yo Local Party
Yes I Crank It Everyday
Haterz Get Mad Cuz
"I Got Me Some Bathin Apes"
 
#52
#52
I'm still dealing with a serious relationship ending, so all I can advise is to get these records ASAP:

"I Do Perceive" - Owen
"It Still Moves" - My Morning Jacket
"Turn on the Bright Lights" - Interpol
 
#53
#53
she said she's gonna quit me,
If I didn't quit the booze.
So I just started drinkin' more,
To see if she would really choose.
And I have to hand it to that girl:
She meant every breath.
An' I'm glad she did, 'cause I was about,
To drink myself to death.

Because my drinkin' problem left today.
She packed up all her things and walked away.
Well, it looks like off the bottle now is where I'm gonna stay,
Because my drinkin' problem left today.



Well, she said I had problems:
Boy, was she ever right?
To keep from goin' home to her,
I'd stay out, drunk, all night.
And I believe that woman left me,
In the nick of time.
If she'd a-stayed much longer,
I'd have drinked up my last dime
 
#54
#54
VolinArizona said:
I'm still dealing with a serious relationship ending, so all I can advise is to get these records ASAP:

"I Do Perceive" - Owen
"It Still Moves" - My Morning Jacket
"Turn on the Bright Lights" - Interpol
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Turn on the Bright Lights was....odd. I couldn't find the others on Lime Wire. But I'll keep trying, thanks.
 
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