From a music stand point, the music is alright.
From a recording standpoint:
The music is to low in the mix. His voice is too loud, and the drums are really muffled out. It's very bland, nothing shimmering, or that stands out. Think of that teacher that taught all monotone in high school, with no lows or highs in their voice. Thats what this reminds me of.
But I mean the music is alright, but not very tight. It needs to be tighter, which goes back to the drums in the mix.
I'm really into recording and producing music by the way.
Not trying to be a downer, just my honest opinion..